VortexVisionz's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fruity Pebbles]

If it wasnt for the title of this cartoon and the fact that I love fruity pebbles lol.. I probably wouldnt have watched this. However it was very basic and does have a lot of flaws with it, but its okay because its all part of the beginning animators learning experience! We all start out somewhere, so im just going to give you some simple yet inspiring words of enlightenment. Keep doing what you love the most and always make an effort to learn and level up your skills. The key is to never give up and to just believe in what you enjoy doing because in all reality... thats what life is really all about. Follow you dreams and enjoy the ride my friend! Hope this was helpful. You can visit my production page for all my latest content and updates here.. Everyone is welcome!-

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[Life is Tough]

Excellent job! This is a brilliant animation that delivers such a simple, yet powerful message! Overall quality of the animation is very well done. Just keep practicing and doing what you love and youll find that your dreams will start falling into place sooner then you thought it would. Just as this animation presented, "work Smarter, not harder". Thats the truth and it will always make things easier to accomplish! Just have fun with what you love doing and learn as you go! Keep up the good work my friend! Visit my production page on facebook if you would like! Everyone is welcome!! -

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[Monday]

This wasnt too bad, just need to work on leveling up your skills so that you can boost your overall views and make the production quality of your videos better. Just practice drawing and finding what kind of style you are looking to achieve and you will be well on your way to creating some awesome content. If this is what you enjoy doing then just keep practicing, believe in yourself, and most important never give up! Hope this helped. Visit my facebook page to to give a like and stay up to date with all of our latest content! -

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Jayrockx92k9 responds:

Thanks, this actually one my first few animations and thanks for the pointers. I will keep practicing and hopefully the next one will be better.

[We made a Facebook Page]

Greetings from Minty Fresh Thoughts! I just wanted to share with you a little bit of advice that may or may not help you out with your future projects. Anyway, I would just like to say that if youre going to make a promotional video to boost page likes then you will need make a lot of enhancements to catch the viewers eyes and make them actually want to make an effort to look further into what you have to offer. With that in mind, you should figure out how to give your videos a higher resolution to start off. You should also work on your drawing skills as much as you can because you will only get better each and every time you do! Not to say this was completely bad, it just lacks in a lot of areas in order to keep the viewers attention and make them put in the effort of actually visiting and liking the page. My suggestion is... level up your creative side from all areas such as drawing, animating, art style, music, and overall production value of your movies. Just get some good practice and learn from others around you so that you can find out what works best for you. Its good to be inspired by people you find interesting because it gives you a reference on what you would actually like to achieve. Just know that the key to success is to just BELIEVE in yourself and to NEVER give up. So with all this said I hope you find this helpful! I will visit your page to give a like in hopes that you could at least return the favor and like my production page as well! Heres the link and good luck my friend! -

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[TM Attract]

This was very brief and the animation was very standard. However i do like the art style of this piece... you seem to have a good understanding of drawing. My advice is that you should work on enhancing the audio quality of your animations and learn how to give your cartoons more fluidity. This will not only boost the amount of views for your videos, but it will also help you to understand and learn how to create better and more entertaining content. If making cartoons is something you really enjoy, then make every effort to learn and achieve a higher level of skill! Keep up the good work

[Fire and Fruitcakes]

This wasnt bad at all. I see that you have a lot of potential in terms of your animation skills. You also have a nice art style. The only thing I could give some advice on.. is that you may want to find a way to improve your audio quality of the cartoon. You might need a better mic or maybe you just need some better editing software. Im not sure, but If the audio was crisp and clean for the animation then it would greatly enhance the overall viewer experience. Voice acting was decent, there were times where I felt it couldve been played out a bit better. Also the overall humor of the cartoon wasnt bad either, but I felt like it was lacking in some areas and needs to have something a little more sporadic to keep the viewers watching. Other than that though, you have a lot of good potential and this was a nice piece of animation. Just keep practicing and learning from others so that you can keep getting better! Hope you found this at least a little helpful! Thanks and good luck

ToasterBrutals responds:

I'll keep that in mind, thanks dude!

[tales of abushu episode 1]

I rate it 4 stars in a sense that it delivered a decent animation with a peaceful story line that would seem suitable for kids. I cant say much else about it for now other than what most of everyone else already said, but I will say this... if animation is your passion then by all means keep making them! You did a good job and I wish you luck

SuperWoof responds:

super thank you ^_^ there's still a fair amount of people who never grow up though :3

[Mike Is Dead: Touchdown]

This wasnt tood bad. You seem to have the basic understanding of how the animation should work. May I suggest as an animator myself, that you use a little more frame by frame drawings to go along with the movements of the characters since you seem to be using a lot of tweens. Theres nothing wrong with using tweens, but in my honest opinion, you should also include a little more frame by frame as well as as enhance the audio in some way. Otherwise keep progressing and learning. hope you found this helpful in some way... if not, then its all good lol

[Man in the Toychest]

This is trippy lol. Nice work

[Vitaman VS Candy Kid]

This wasnt bad! the overall quality of the animation could have been a lot better, but given the circumstances of the deadlines and all for a project.. it was pretty good. I know how it is to work as a team.. and when you finish a project by working together its an overall good experience to enjoy as you see something come together. Keep up the good work!